Completely and utterly disheartened by seeing some of the other entries that just our course has to offer, I managed to muster the inspiration to give my covers a few last changes and I feel they are as best as I can possibly get them now, before the deadline:
Above: I just responded to the feed back of the tutorial and removed some of the cartoony colour and made it feel more ominous. I’m not a massive fan of the first one but the second one has a completely different (and I’d say better) feel. There is a subtle split-personality element as well as the integration into the city.
Below: This one took a lot longer than it should have/ looks like it took, but I think it is a great example of the message- part of the city. If I had to choose one of the below images, I say I prefer the right one as it is a nice balance of simplicity and complexity. The left image just feels like there is too much happening- but is that what makes it better?
It was suggested to me that I lower the opacity of the map and add a blur to it but it just seemed as though it’s an eyesore and if you need to make it less visible, why’s it there anyway?